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May 03, 2005

Black Driveway April Shower

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A spring
addition
to the
black driveway
series

it's hard
to believe
that
such
a pretty
poof

could
cause
so much
nasal
 distress

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Posted by Dakota at May 3, 2005 06:31 AM
Comments

Wow! Another winner! I love this photo..

Posted by: desmene at May 4, 2005 02:55 PM

Spectacular!

and what desmene said.

Also, the poem is a nice multi-level metaphotophora
leaving us between between a rock and a hard place
with Bush and his crowd of liars -- hit the driveway
or have an allergy attack :). Also, the allusion to Bush's gay fixation (poof) was a nice touch.

Takes me hours to deconstruct even a short post of yours.

-A

Posted by: An0n at May 4, 2005 06:47 PM

Hi Desmene - I'm so glad you liked it! and that you left me a lovely note, with which my heart is warmed. Sniffily D

Posted by: Dakota at May 4, 2005 07:08 PM

Hi An0n -

So lovely to hear from you again.

I fear that your commentary finds more erudicity in my poem than I ever intended. Truly, it was just my unconscious flopping around in the breeze.

It's a good thing someone out there exhibits some scholarly tendencies. Your thoughtful contributions are always gratefully received. D

Posted by: Dakota at May 4, 2005 07:19 PM